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Coloring Outside the Lines

While orange taloms of dawn scratch at fading moonscape

Demeter’s tears fall like shooting stars

Each droplet a new life founded

Each droplet new visions seen

Widening landscape of inherrent possibilities

Probability washes among rainbow beaches

Another commentary po.em from Lorraine andmyself. Her words are italicIzed. More of her words are located at and

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