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Two more collaborative comment po.ems created by Mark and I. My comments/words are in italics; Mark’s plain.

oceans

sleep-swimming dreams

flotsam and jetsam of the soul

filtered from past tides

Shimmer like starfish

in inky sea of night sky

&

spectre’s sing

extrasensory perception revolutions

world of thought coming

from unconscious core

© Lorraine & Mark

photograph: (c) Lorraine 2017

Try creating some commentary po.etry – it’s an interesting creative challenge

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